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        Oct 03, 2018
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    NOT NEW Evanescence
Evanescence
the heart fears
the loss of someone
so loved 
would we lose all memory
a loved one lost to eternity
in moments
like a rainbow in the sky
after a brief rainy storm
just comes and vanishes
in a moment 
like the rainbow
across the Niagara mist
does
Evanescent
sense of fragrance it does leave
but fading memory a fear breeds 
will ye forget the one that came
but now has gone 
a young one
just of three days
only
lost her mommy 
sad isn't it
but it's destiny
About This Poem
Last Few Words: natures extreme cruelty sadness
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
 
                
Comments
lovedly
6 years 11 months ago
Oh my
was it nonsense
none have read it even once
two months
all attention