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Feb 09, 2021
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No Time To Die
Age never speaks
just now I learned
a young
not aged one
not yet FIFTY
left the world suddenly
happily
no grief
only relief
others grieve
lucky he
no pain
nor pill
BUDDHA 's
will
— lovedly, Feb 09, 2021
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: GONE WITH THE BREEZE TO FREEZE A young one passes away soonly
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
lovedly
5 years 3 months ago
5 DAYS SINCE
READ THIS TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
lovedly
5 years 3 months ago
he was BUDDHA OLD
TO TIME NOW I HAVE BEEN SOLD
OLE IS GOAL
15 OR 1015