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Oct 10, 2024
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No Burden
She asks me if these are the pants she should wear.
Or, would another glass of wine be a bad idea.
Should we go out, or stay in
and watch the movie we discussed earlier in the day.
I am not burdened by any of these queries.
These simple questions are where the love lies now.
— Michael Anthony, Oct 10, 2024
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
John Leslie O'Kelley
1 year 7 months ago
Michael Anthony
Simple moments and simple questions moving towards a better more full relationship. I loved your attitude. Another beuatiful poem and I get it. Thank you!
Michael Anthony
1 year 7 months ago
Thank you for the kind words
Thank you for the kind words on this piece Leslie - much appreiated!
Cheers