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Oct 11, 2025
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NO-BALLS PISS PRIZE
THAT ELUSIVE AWARD I HAVE EYED
WAS DENIED TO MY HI-FLYING PRIDE!
I DESERVE IN MY HOUR
THIS PREFERRED GOLDEN SHOWER
I AM SOUR, YOU CHEATS BETTER HIDE!
Thank you for your attention to this matter!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: ...not really about me..though I do feel needy...
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Ruby Lord
6 months 1 week ago
I wish I'd wrote this. Very…
I wish I'd wrote this. Very good :)
Lavender
6 months 1 week ago
NO-BALLS PISS PRIZE
Hello, Thomas,
The best (worst) part of this is that the entire limerick is in caps. It makes me cringe...
L