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Feb 15, 2018
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NIGHT NOISES (SUNKU)
midnight
bell tower
gong bang delight
trolleys
twirl waltz time
in moonbeam bright
High sky
piccolo
sings lullaby
sewer
viola
steam minor key
poet’s
candle-lit
orchestra pit
— Eumolpus, Feb 15, 2018
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Last Few Words: Being asked to give it a try. 2/3/4 syllables in repeated verses.
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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raj
8 years 5 months ago
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IRiz
8 years 4 months ago
sounds of night town!
sounds of night town!
very clever and fresh alive imagery
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