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Apr 07, 2018
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NEWS (North East South West)
Venomous blackguard
Abets aggressive diehard
Unbalanced retard
— OriginalRhyku, Apr 07, 2018
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Last Few Words: Political pressures prevent principled promoters pushing proactive peaceful progressive priorities
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
Geezer
8 years 2 months ago
Just thought...
I would pop in to let you know, that I always read these. I originally started to read them just because I wondered if they made sense. Now I read them as though I would a favorite cartoon in the news paper. I love the intrinsic way that most of them describe a situation or particular type of personality.
i truly wish that you could be persuaded to write some rhyming poetry. I know that if you had the rhythm down, you could make some really great rhyme. Anyhow, just thought I would let you know. ~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku
8 years 2 months ago
Geezer
Thanks for your gracious comments. I will submit a rhyming poem soon although all three lines of my Rhykus should rhyme all the time.
Geezer
8 years 1 month ago
I see that...
they do and what I meant; was to have more than a Rhyku. Maybe like a couple of quatrains?
~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku
8 years 1 month ago
Geezer
Your wish is my command. Please review my latest offering - Estate Distaste