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Dec 29, 2023
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The New Year
Resolutions made
The day of the year arrives
Unseen, unfulfilled
— Clentin, Dec 29, 2023
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Haiku or Senryu?
It is about nature in a seasonal manner and seems to have a “cutting” word which I’d say would be arrives. We have verb tense issue with the second line and I suggest “the DAY of the year arrives” for correction. I guessing that’s actually a typo.
Nice job
Tim
Clentin Martin
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you. For reading and
Thank you. For reading and comments.