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Rula
Rula
May 08, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Love poems

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My Only Published Poem (March Contest)

My friends wonder why
I don't often write
a poem about you;

"maybe she's not aware
of the Mother's day!"

"or maybe she doesn't care,"
they'd simply say.

They didn't know then
that you're the only
published poem I've
ever had
mother.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Rula

Rula

9 years 11 months ago

Roscoe!

Thank you for the supporting words. Much appreciated.

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 11 months ago

and they say

cataract I have
I said no ops please
let me go blind if so be it writ

LORD BYRON
returns in me

R

raj

9 years 11 months ago

Wow Rula!

Wow Rula!
the closing lines are so vivid and strong..."you are the only published poem I have ever had mother"..these lines keep ringing in my ears long after the read...

Rula

Rula

9 years 11 months ago

Dear Raj

À wow, coming from you, is absolutely highly appreciated.
Thank you!

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

9 years 11 months ago

An excellent example

of free verse, something I wish I was better at. It is also brimming with love and pathos. It shows consummate skill the way you keep the winding up of the main point to very last word. Alone, the first and third verse make up a poem but the middle verse is a masterful inclusion.

Rula

Rula

9 years 11 months ago

Hello Keith

really appreciate your kind words. Been the first comment I'm getting today, I am not sure if anything will make my day better than your kind visit.
Thank you

Rula

Rula

7 years ago

Mark

You're so kind. I'm happy you like it.
Thank you.

Rula

Rula

7 years ago

Never

Unfortunately Alzheimer left her with very little appreciation for anything...if at all.
V.much appreciate your kind visit Stan.