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May 13, 2022
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MY MEMORABLE BEST POEM ....2015 AD
Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last
all else does rust
— lovedly, May 13, 2022
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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Candlewitch
4 years 2 months ago
dear Lovedly,
this is marvelous! thank you for sharing it with us!
*warm hugs, Cat
lovedly
4 years 2 months ago
Thanks Cats
so many outstanding POETS liked this poem
then I was like OUT STANDING
NOW IN ........>>>>>
LOL
THANKS
Jackweb
4 years 2 months ago
Nice!
Apt but with full message.
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