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May 10, 2025
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My Last Love Poem
I hate that I love you
I hope, one day, I won't
Until then,
I'll cling to every word you say
I'll let you tear out my heart
And say that you're sorry
And that you love me
The scratch in my throat
Begging me
To say "I love you too,"
Instead,
I say,
Goodbye
With shaking hands
And a cracking voice...
My love,
Goodbye.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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