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Apr 29, 2018
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Multiverse
Multiverse
The water poured from the tap
to splatter on a stainless steel plate.
Its energy spread from this impact
forming a seemingly empty circle
defined by froth forming at its rim.
And in each bubble I saw a universe;
tiny to me, but as vast as all eternity
to any consciousness living within.
And the energy, when the water hit,
echoed with the force of a bang.
— tyro, Apr 29, 2018
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Last Few Words: I had just finished washing the dishes, and was cleaning the sink when this appeared.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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valene
8 years 1 month ago
i tnink you mean 'bhang' lol.
look it up.
eph x
tyro
8 years 1 month ago
It is no more weird than
It is no more weird than quantum mechanics, which is why I love modern day physics, since it seems more like metaphysics, than traditional physics.. Abd by the way, Bhand is not the only way to step out of the box, or enhance the imagination.
valene
8 years 1 month ago
well, you'd never imagine me
eph x
tyro
8 years 1 month ago
I must admit, you are
I must admit, you are intriguing.