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The Ms. Madonnamonica Pop, Con Show Supreme - (Strong adult language content)

Things can only help define
her as undefinable;

seemingly frail, oppose her you'll fail
give her one reason, she's had a belly full!

Purely in my interest I notice
all instances start resembling "luck";

she'll always look great, although "fashionably late"
because of you she will not give a "fuck".

Merely an independent sparkle of an act
that's more "smoke" than "mirrors" I think;

but, don't you surmise, or she will surprise
you-during a most "regrettable blink"!

Using her misdirectional way with "grace"
she propels her precise-private con;

before you leave, you'll reluctantly believe
her whole story, with your assets all gone!

So vague with her hidden agendas
that "pulsate"as she orchestrates in the air;

before your own eyes, you'll soon realize
this crazy bitch plays a game that's not, "fair".

So quickly she smoothly manipulates
every moment 'til they all fill a "chain";

a necklace of rules, that glistens at fools
which she wears until none dare remain!

Also with this stoic knowledge
after all's been said and done;

without any choice, in your serious voice
you've helped "fix" all the bells that she's rung!

So the most highly recommended "flight-plan"
whether flying too "low" or too "fast';

is fly under each star, and all forms of radar
or she'll be handing to you your own "ass";

and while we're actually at "it",
never mind about questioning "why";

you'll soon know "full well", you've helped make your "own hell"
and naively became her tight alibi!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I keep making revisions.......am I done, yet? Or, am I merely......."posturing", or moisturizing ? Somebody please update, me ! Thanx, in the banx; doc.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 11 months ago

Hello,

Your title caught my eye! What an enjoyable read for me to discover! I like your subtle rhyming scheme. It is very hard to choose favorite lines with this piece but I think I like these best:

and while we're actually at "it",
never mind about questioning, "why";

you'll soon know "full well", you've helped make your, "own hell"
and naively became her, alibi.

very clever!

always, Cat

docmaverick

docmaverick

13 years 11 months ago

As usual, Cat....

...you've gone and made my "day", once again. Thanx, sooo very much for your bright comments.......by the way, I was actually going for "clever".
Good "eye", and good-day;
sincerely,
doc.