loved

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moms love

I think i shall also abandon poetry
and
write plain and simple prose
so many poems
on mothers did I compose
many were better than prose
as sentiments for mothers... we... can only convey
once in a life's unique way

as nothing on earth can replace a mother
why...
because only she does lifelong bother
to be with us all our lives

mothers love comes before wives
even after she has left

Oh my gosh
what a surprise

so for a mother's love
praise
in a standing ovation all rise...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Frenchf

12 years 10 months ago

I love my mother too

Who doesn't? Just curious. My brothers had mixed love hate. Standing ovation for all mothers. lovely

loved

12 years 10 months ago

Wellall I can say is

thanks in capitals

Jenifer James

12 years 10 months ago

I'm working on a mother poem

I'm working on a mother poem at the moment. Being one, I want unconditional love/ having had one, I'm not so sure.

Frenchf

12 years 10 months ago

As time passes

All the supposed wrong they did fades into the background and only the good is remembered

loved

12 years 10 months ago

you are that mother

I'd love to have
All the best

Frenchf

12 years 10 months ago

Adoption

If you are young enough and I am old enough for you to be my natural born child xxx

loved

12 years 10 months ago

perhaps

as you mayn't know
the number of dawns
I have scored ,

maybe it could be the other way around ..
anyway ...
its kind of you
to have respected mothers true .

I am an actor of poetry
I get into the garb
of anyone who so desires
to extract ...
an emotion ...
no motion

Frenchf

12 years 10 months ago

Age

What an amazing way to describe age! The number of dawns I have scored. Scribbler, mother love is despite knowing your child is a mass murderer!

loved

12 years 10 months ago

only a mom can convince any judge

her child is juvenile
at all ages
so pardon him ...

thanks for counting the dawns
why scribble???

scribbler

12 years 10 months ago

Hi Loved

I reckon mothers love us because they are blind to our faults lol. A nice tribute to those who are blinded by love..............stan

Seren

12 years 10 months ago

loved

My greatest joy in life is being a mum .... I know my kids have faults but I find it hard to see them Lol
I really liked this

Well done

Love Jc xxx