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c lynn brooks

Feb 02, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Moment In Time

Wisps of smoke
now cloud my mind
what was then
is not now

Has all been lost to time
and what is time
but empty space

The empty space where mystery lives
what was
what is
become the same
Am I alive
have I died
all blends into one

And I have lost myself
to time

— c lynn brooks, Feb 02, 2020

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north carolina usa, USA

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Edgar Alan Poe, ray Bradbury, John Grissom, .Alan S Jeeves James patterson,

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Critiques

6 years 4 months ago

Very rightly you say time is a moment

your inspiration
made me compose
a fresh poem since posted
thanks

CB

6 years 4 months ago

Thank you

for stopping by and leaving a comment

CB

6 years 4 months ago

Alan

Thank you for your very kind words I am glad you liked ths poem. This was just a small sample of what goes through this mind when you have nothing but time to think lol