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Apr 15, 2022
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Meeting your gaze
My eyes
meet your gaze.
Then suddenly
my mind is no longer
in a maze that murmurs
towards madness.
But is welcomed into
the opened optimistic
arms of love .
As I’m met with
you a single silken
symphonic serenade .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
4 years ago
dear Edward,
could you please these two lines:(in a )(maze that murmurs) to read:
(in a maze that murmurs) I really like your poem, especially these lines:
As I’m met with
you a single silken
symphonic serenade
good work all around!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
keep up your energy for Friday/
think happy thoughts!
|Edward nigma
4 years ago
Thank you
My inspiration was
https://youtu.be/3BFhn0yqVQ8
Geezer
4 years ago
I do believe...
that this is a romantic poem! Letting a person know that you are transformed when you look into their eyes! ~ Geez.
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|Edward nigma
4 years ago
It is
I’ve never been in a relationship or in love but I’m very good at expressing or writing it .
Thank you
One
3 years 11 months ago
Ed
you may have never been in love but you're filled with words that express it better than many of us who have been.
Have you ever written a co-write? I'd be honoured to work with you sometime.
regards
One.
|Edward nigma
3 years 11 months ago
No I have never co written
Thank you
Candlewitch
3 years 11 months ago
dear Edward,
good morning! co-writes are easy to do...first you agree on subject matter. next you decide on who goes first. then you decide on where you do it, through private messages or e-mail, etc.
*hugs, Cat