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Marriage

She was for me,love
Forever placed within my heart
She was for me strength

— Clentin, Feb 24, 2023

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Lavender

Lavender

3 years 3 months ago

Hello, Clentin,

What a gracious haiku. You both are very fortunate. Is this poem created to mark an anniversary, perhaps?
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Seren

Seren

3 years 3 months ago

Dear Clentin

This is just Brilliant, you've written such a beautiful tribute to your love, congratulations on 55yrs that is an amazing achievement in this day and age.

Here is to many more. <3

hugs Jayne x