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Jun 29, 2022
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The man bearing a broken hand
The deaf
and muted man
bounded to a
broken hand .
Is drawn into
this world
that can
never fully
understand.
Leaving him as
the single strand
of sand .
Lying along the
blackbird beach
of belittlement .
— Edward nigma, Jun 29, 2022
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Edward nigma
3 years 11 months ago
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/kRTaduMffrY
Jackweb
3 years 11 months ago
DISABILITY!
Having to adapt for a person's disability or them having to adapt and use coping mechanisms does not stop it being a relatively normal life.
Edward nigma
3 years 11 months ago
Well true
My inspiration was the movie called the heart is a lonely hunter
https://youtu.be/pF-r1aOD6Vc
Which is based of the book of the same name .
One
3 years 11 months ago
E.Nigma
We all have issues that we need to work around to live as comfortably as we can. It's what is inside us that makes us. Our mind & soul drives us, we just sometimes get stuck inside a vessel that needs extra attention.
I'm at work & can't access the links you've provided so my comment is based solely on the written piece so I could be off with my response.
"Lying along the
blackbird beach
of belittlement"
I believe this represents all of us, it's just how we deal with it that makes us who we are.
Nice job.
One.