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MALIGNANT DENIAL

Doug Ford exposed drumpfy again
truth's sword is a thorn of some pain
the wee terror got mad
'cause his tariffs look bad
it's so sad, like his dad, he's insane

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Any help for improvement, suggestions are always welcome.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

5 months 3 weeks ago

hello

I agree, he has shown his true colors in his quest for Kingship...

I like and respect the subtly of this piece. Thank you for posting it!

most sincerely, Cat