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Nov 15, 2011
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Lovers Tiff
Stephanie, Stephanie, Stephanie
Your demands will be the death of me
I’ve done my best now let me rest
You’ve drained my body physically
You’ve worn me out I’ve had enough
I can’t keep on performing
Lets take a break, relax, unwind
Continue in the morning
Okay, come on, let’s do it
We’ve had our little tiff
I’ve had myself a rest, and
Now I’m getting rather stiff
So get up to the bedroom
We’ll continue with this caper
But you can do the pasting, and
I will hang the paper
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Comments
the_fool
13 years 11 months ago
very nice
great piece! felt the 'condescending but loving' in the first S, and a great transition to the 'now lets move on' in the last. can't wait to read more of your work!
shazbat
13 years 11 months ago
Glad you liked it, thanks for
Glad you liked it, thanks for stopping by
John
loved
13 years 11 months ago
TWISTS AND TURNS
MAKE SEX EVEN SEXIER YOU KNOW IT BEST AS MUCH AS WE ALL DOOOOOOOOOO
sorry for the caps .
inadvertent don't show me ...
as some do
shazbat
13 years 11 months ago
it's the little twists that
it's the little twists that make it more interesting
John