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May 21, 2020
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Lovely Dale
A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry
neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon
yet our true love
throughout the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where
yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me
will always be
— lovedly, May 21, 2020
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
tyro
6 years ago
A very beautiful poem about a
A very beautiful poem about a merging into one.
lovedly
6 years ago
Thank you so muchly
tyro