Loop Poetry

I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans

My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.

— Rula, Jan 18, 2021

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just wanted to try my hand at another form of poetry. Hope you enjoy it.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

Critiques

lovedly

5 years 4 months ago

you may start with me

Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am

Lavender

5 years 4 months ago

Loop Poetry

Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L

Rula

5 years 4 months ago

Thank you dear Lavender

You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.

Lavender

5 years 4 months ago

Oh, Rula!

This is wonderful!
L

lovedly

5 years 4 months ago

Revised after Lave silently advised

I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.

just imagine