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limbotiations

folded in the currents of light
sleeping like a poised
spring

there is beauty
negotiated
in ugly announcements

— Esker, Sep 21, 2013

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Editing Stage: Rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

12 years 10 months ago

beauty

Can be found
In the ugliest
of situations

If we look past
The exterior
Focus on the interior
It's on the inside

Esker

Esker

12 years 10 months ago

beautiful ugly

raw and wounded
breathing in the lair
of the world
a realm
balm
pressed
damp like handprintz

Rula

Rula

12 years 10 months ago

saying less

for more. Can't agree more Steve.

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