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Oct 30, 2025
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LEAKER of the HOUSE
maga-mike is a johnson, I jest
the kind decent people detest
he's a sick, twisted prick
his own bitch wouldn't trick
and a sick, drippy, limp one at best
About This Poem
Last Few Words: not sure about the word "trick" here. Can it be used as a verb? I mean, in that frame?
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Michael Anthony
5 months 3 weeks ago
Yes!
Yes!
Candlewitch
5 months 3 weeks ago
:)
You Nailed It!
fondly Cat