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Aug 17, 2025
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Leafy Days
Leafy Days
Filled with bright Fall colors
Maple gold and yellow leaves appear
Mixed with green grass create a bright autumn blanket
Allowing us the option to choose
Making our hearts flutter
Flourishing
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Lavender
1 month 2 weeks ago
Leafy Days
Hello, Clentin,
I feel the happiness here. Very playful.
Thank you!
L
Clentin
1 month 2 weeks ago
Thank you for comment
Thank you for comment
I appreciate it very much!
Geezer
1 month 2 weeks ago
I could feel...
the brisk fall air and see the red and gold hues of the fluttering leaves as they fall to litter the green grass, excellent visuals. ~ Geez.
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Clentin
1 month 2 weeks ago
Thank you for reading and…
Thank you for reading and your generous comments