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        Nov 15, 2019
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    Last Night
Every time
I feel it's last night 
they help me with
sea dishes
full of delight 
my system packs up
ere its sunlight 
I ask myself
where has it gone 
what
Last Night 
take delight  me is still
A
L
I
V
E
for another
LAST
NIGHT
no rage
no fright
it may again
not be my last
what
damn
night
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
 
                
Comments
Edna Sweetlove
5 years 10 months ago
Confusing
Were you on something when you wrote this?