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JUST BEYOND MIDDLE
We've been through the years of youth
with passions hot as any fire
when my skin was clear and smooth
and love was equal to desire.
I oft recall those days.
Later came the family years,
raising sons and still in love.
A time of laughter, sometimes tears
yet love won out push come to shove.
Together we went through that maze.
Now we're back alone once more,
children gone but love still here.
We barely glimpse that final shore.
Inevitably it draws near
as the future clears through thinning haze.
And I can see us growing old
helping each other cope with time,
warming each other in the cold
while we perfect our long life's rhyme
and passions reaches ember's phase.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
9 years 1 month ago
greetings
Thanks. I appreciate your time to read and comment...........stan
themoonman
9 years 1 month ago
Growing old,
it sure is nice to have someone
with ya ... good to see you Stan.
nice poem
scribbler
9 years 1 month ago
Hi Richard
I'll be glad when I'm all the way back with a new provider.And yes having a companion to grow old with is great. We both are getting over a bout of bronchitis and it's good to have somebody around to trade coughs with lol...........stan
Geezer
9 years 1 month ago
A testament...
to true love. And with good rhyme and rhythm too! You been taking some of those brain pills or something? LOL Nice to see that true love never dies. ~ Gee.
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scribbler
9 years 1 month ago
hi Geeze
I tried brain pills but body rejected them lol.Thanks for the visit.............stan