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Nov 16, 2025
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INTER(N)MISSION
If your face waxes red with your lies
there's a family secret disguise
it's an orange-tan fake
called the tricky-trump cake
or the fake'n'bake plaintiff surprise!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I tried reading this out loud...it's nearly a tongue-twister!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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