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Jun 27, 2017
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Indirect imagery (imagery workshop)
The peace in pieces, deathly silence.
— weirdelf, Jun 27, 2017
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wesley snow
9 years ago
So this is where your link leads.
Still, I have an example only. Where is my explanation. I am a verbal learner, not a sight one. I need explanations.
weirdelf
9 years ago
well... it's supposed to be indirect imagery
and this just occurred to me. I saw an abandoned battlefield, replete with corpses and smoking ruins.
scribbler
9 years ago
yep
peace in pieces can refer to everything from a slight argument to full out war with all which they might entail.
jane210660
9 years ago
This is what I see
The day after that Christmas day during WW1, when they all played football together..
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