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Apr 22, 2016
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Indelible Memoirs
No alphabets can conjoin
to form words to express
what lips and fingertips script
stroke after delightful stroke
a poem in invisible ink
of those intimate liquid moments
indelible
They come alive
when I close my eyes
like glow worms and goosebumps
with fingertips and nose tips
gently strumming the heartstrings
and amidst them I hear
in a heightened pitch
your sighs
on the wrinkled sheet I read
those verses
in shades of pink and scarlet
tinted in moonlight
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years ago
An apt title raj.
An apt title raj.
Wonderful use of analogy.
But not sure about "glow worms" . I never thought that "worms" might be of any beauty. Maybe I am missing something?
raj
10 years ago
Thanks for being the only one
Thanks for being the only one to stop by, your time, read and comment...many find glow worms to be beautiful...
Regards,
Rula
10 years ago
My pleasure Raj
Thanks for teaching me something new. New vocab. and the "worms"? I don't think I can ever like them ;)
raj
10 years ago
Hi Rula
Another name for them is I think Fireflies...may be you will now know why I said glow worms look beautiful at night...
Regards,
Geezer
9 years 12 months ago
I thought...
this one very sensual and that maybe the worms had their own analogy. Yes, fireflies have a rare beauty about them; like earthbound stars floating through the garden. Nice work, ~ Gee
raj
9 years 12 months ago
Thank you Gee
Thank you Gee
Appreciate your visit, read and comment.
Regards,
jane210660
9 years 11 months ago
Beautiful
Beautiful
Just glimpsing through some of your poems, this is gorgeous. Jx
raj
9 years 11 months ago
Thank you Jane
Thank you Jane
Appreciate your taking the time to read this one and for your chimes...
Regards,