Imprisoned Thoughts

The wind is roaming
while my thoughts are imprisoned
in the gentle rain.

— Rula, May 21, 2013

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

Critiques

Ian.T

13 years ago

Rula

An excellent Senyru, that encompasses feelings and nature as an example, though I can never think of your thoughts being imprisoned..
Yours as always, Ian.T

Rula

12 years 11 months ago

Thanks Ian

A nice compliment. I need it :)
I am happy you like it.