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I'm missing my moon

I'm missing my moon

I wait for the night just to see her

I wonder if she will be shining bright 

Or, on the other side 

I wonder if she will be blending with the sky 

 

I'm missing my moon

I know she changes her shape

Sometimes she's full of herself

But, if you stare

Sometimes you will notice she's hiding her face

 

I'm missing my moon

But I know she's always there

Whether I see her fully or partially

She's just in front of me 

Whether far away or within a reach 

 

I'm missing my moon

I wait for the night just to see her 

Because she's everything I need to feel

And, specially

Because it's the only time I can fully breath

 

I'm missing my moon

She's the one to give me name and sense

Without her my thoughts and feelings are a mess

All day I miss my girl

Without her I don't have myself

— kissesfromlen11333, Jun 13, 2026

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