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May 04, 2015
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If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web
yup.
that's the whole poem.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years 11 months ago
Hello Anna
Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.
weirdelf
10 years 11 months ago
You are a fly in the spider's web of your own causes
I've lost count.
They are all good causes though.
Kailashana2
10 years 11 months ago
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn inside out, and my poems are askance.
Hi Jess. A woman's work is never done. lol.
weirdelf
10 years 11 months ago
True
Lysistrata was wrong. Lots of sex stops war.
emeka ozurumba
10 years 11 months ago
how?
baby fighters along the way,
weirdelf
10 years 11 months ago
wrong! Murderer!
Babies live to continue the evolutionary line.
Esker
10 years 11 months ago
Always the artist...
Bravo my Dear!!!!!!!
bravo..
(mr Wolf)
Seren
10 years 11 months ago
the essence of you right
the essence of you right there in that one sentence
love xox
raj
10 years 11 months ago
Hi Anna
would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...