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raj
Jul 21, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Identity [Sunku]

Tattoos
piercings
mere expressions

helping
the challenged
a humble act

fine art
does not need
a signature

— raj, Jul 21, 2018

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Critiques

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raj

7 years 10 months ago

Thanks Greg

Thanks Greg
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Rula

Rula

7 years 10 months ago

Hello raj

As usual, I like whatever you write.
I thought the stanzas' consequence lead to a fabulous coda.

R

raj

7 years 10 months ago

Thank you Rula for reading..

Thank you Rula for reading...good to know you liked this...I continue to do my bit to keep posting Sunkus not just because I like this form but also to keep the Sunku form in the eyes of others
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