icarus

Icarus flew too close to the sun, not to angelic heights.
It spoils such a short poem.

I like this short piece, it affects me.

You could have saved Icarus from falling, I read both the original and the edited piece and as Jess says it is the second version that s true to myth.
Yet another picture of heartbreak, we build things up and sometimes have to be there when they come crashing down.
The way is eternal, a good write!
Yours Ian.T

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