I Want You To Know

Before being sandwiched
in every day's mundane chores,
those frivolous issues, and some more,
I come to read you,

I smile.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

raj

10 years 10 months ago

Rula

Good one but needs more..push the accelerator and continue to drive...you know what i mean?

Regards,

Rula

10 years 10 months ago

I know what you mean, you might be right, but sometimes it comes to you like this. Just a thought and you like it as is , no more no less. May be I should have posted it rather as a blog. But I appreciate your thoughts and the visit.
Thank you.

emogothgirl

10 years 10 months ago

well

i think it's perfect. it made ME smile :) nice little write.

mag

Rula

10 years 10 months ago

if I could draw a smile

On someone's face every morning, then my mission is accomplished :)
Thank you for your visit and the comment.

wesley snow

10 years 10 months ago

If I asked you to change it,

would you?

Rula

10 years 10 months ago

Sir

Would never like to go against whatever suggested for improvement, especially when it comes from my dear mentor, but I don't have anything to add to this little piece.
It is how it is intended. If I have got your question right sir.