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Jul 12, 2025
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I AM.
I am the summer breeze that soft, wafts through your soul,
I am the gentle shower that makes your love grow whole.
I am the sparkling snows that chill on winter’s breeze,
I am the glowing sun; I will not let you freeze.
These things I am and more, for you my lady fair.
When you ask if I be true, bowed low, this oath I swear.
My lady you are all, for you there is no task,
Nought I will not do; command me, never ask.
My soul no longer mine; You stole it with your guile.
My spirit still is strong; you feed it all the while.
If I were knight so fearless, bold, as in days of yore,
On my silver steed I would bear you to my Camelot by the shore.
And you would need no other, to you all things I’d be:
Husband, lover, protector, friend in my castle by the sea.
And we should live forever, in Avalon we'd dwell,
But now the sounds of dawning awake me from your spell.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 months ago
Dear Alex,
This is a spectacular pouring out of your devotion, exposing your inner being. I sat spellbound, as I read your words... exquisite and immortal!
may much joy be yours, Cat
Alex Tanner
1 month 1 week ago
Hello Cat
A bit late responding but thank you, the effect I was hoping to get. Alex
Lavender
1 month 1 week ago
I AM
Hello, Alex,
I think Cat said it well - I, too, sat spellbound.
Alex Tanner
1 month 1 week ago
Hi L.
Thank you, I'm pleased to get this reaction. Alex