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Jan 26, 2023
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Hybrid
Skin like snow
Amber eyes of fire
Vermillion velvet lips
Gnarled by opalescent fangs
Ivory talons
That snatch in the night
Drinking blood from her victims
A gorey sight
Howling at the moon
She cried out in vain
A mix of confusion and purpose
Hybrid is her name
— RoseBlack, Jan 26, 2023
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thanks Kat
The wheels are spinning....a mix of lycan and vampire poems...perhaps my own book...
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thanks Mark
These are fun to write
Indivisible_Origin
3 years 5 months ago
Minotaurs
What of those? Any in your repertoire? I wrote of one once ages ago. I'm a fan of your work.
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Hello
I have not written about minotaurs. I'm am more into Lycans and vampires. I am glad you like my work.
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 5 months ago
Are you doing a series
It sounds like a continuation from yesterday. You should come up with a story. Do a little chapbook, with your sketches.
Might be cool
Tim
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
I was considering
A series.. I like the whole lycan and vampire concept...even before the Underworld became popular. I am not sure how well I can do with the artwork but it would be fun to try...great idea. thank you!
Candlewitch
3 years 5 months ago
dear Carrie,
I think you should do it! it's genius!
*ever, eddy & cat
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thanks Cat
I will give it a try
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 5 months ago
“…it would be fun to try.”
Then do it silly. Lol
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
It's the drawings
I'm not sure about. I primarily do faces.
Alex Tanner
3 years 5 months ago
Hybrid
I like it Rose. Alex
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thanks Alex
Glad you enjoyed
Seren
3 years 5 months ago
Dear Carrie
I loved the carry on from Wolf Moon. I really think it's a great poem.
Looking forward to the rest of your series.
Brava!!!
Love & hugs Jayne xxx
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thanks Jayne
More to come...Lycans don't need a full moon to shapeshift.
Lavender
3 years 5 months ago
Hybrid
Hello, Carrie,
This seems to flow as a natural realm for you - great writing!
L
RoseBlack
3 years 5 months ago
Thank you L
It really does!!! More to come
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