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Nov 15, 2025
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HOW COWS BOW NOW
she's not jumping ship you dumb twit!
she's just pumping more of her shit
....LOOK OUT BELOW!
for the excrement ho'
it's a show, yeah, you're just being lit!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Little birdie in the sky Dropped a turdie in my eye Gee, I'm glad cows don't fly
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
5 months ago
Yes...
Makes me think of how the USA is treating its' neighbors and allies. Lady Liberty has her blindfold on, so that she doesn't have to see the people that she is shitting on. Even if that's not what you meant, that's what I got. ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
5 months ago
Dear Thomas,
I enjoyed,(?cringed) and could relate to this venting of yours, thank you!
always, Cat
Candlewitch
5 months ago
A show...
A real Shit Show!