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Mar 18, 2023
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Hospice
Care issued daily
Giving a final prayer
With Family’s love
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Geezer
3 years 1 month ago
A good piece...
describing at home care for the critically ill. I think everyone would want a caretaker like described. Someone who takes care of the patient with love and respect. BTW, [Hospice] ~ Geezer.
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Clentin
3 years 1 month ago
Thank you. In life we will or
Thank you. In life we will or already have experienced the last days if those we loved
Lavender
3 years 1 month ago
Hospice
Hello, Clentin,
Anyone familiar with hospice care understands how your words could be so brief, yet hold so much. I find them to be healing. Very tender.
L
Clentin
3 years 1 month ago
Thank you Lavender for
Thank you Lavender for reading my poems and for your comments
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
caps what caps bare head
care issued daily
giving a final prayer
with family’s love...
see no caps and s in title could be changed to c
hospice...
''hope only speaks politely in cell eventually...''
this could be taken as acrostic
Clentin
3 years 1 month ago
Thank you
Thank you
C is right.thanks again!
Late at night not all is right!
I hit wrong key
Clentin
3 years 1 month ago
Thank you
Thank you
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