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Apr 25, 2021
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Hello Chicago
You are resident of Illinois
I visited Chicago many times
now Covid bars me
I love the lake and the beach
How I wish we had met then
life is like a flowing river
some swim along
others across
few swim against the current
but I can't swim
they put me on a boat
and with a pump skin bellow
which would float
if i am about to sink
no I can't drown
I am like the rock of Gibraltar
as heavy
believe me
How I wish to come to Chicago
once more to see the bridge
on the canal part
as ships gradually dart
some excitation I missed
so they showed me the Beans
'Twas exquisite
as much incredible
you all know it
— lovedly, Apr 25, 2021
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
5 years 1 month ago
I think that...
You have Chicago and Boston mixed up! Do they have great beans in Chicago?
I've never been there, I wouldn't know. Or are you full of beans, as my mother would say?
~ Geez.
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lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
GEEZ
Step out of your windows
go and see the
SILVER MIRROR BEAN
NOT BEANS
it's as high as the ALPS perhaps
you can see the whole of Chicago
as you see yourself in a mirror
google if u may
in Neo there is no way
ah to upload snaps
ask CEO OR PAUL
WHY live in Queen Victoria era
lol