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May 12, 2012
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From Green Mansions
From many green mansions
this old house,
the windows open
crossing a beam of light,
poet dust.
— Kailashana2, May 12, 2012
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Esker
14 years 2 months ago
valium pressbook taste
the quiet shade of restless keep
the universe of sparks that hover
in the rays and gleam like
mineral in a broken seam
and I read awake but in a dream
while witching hour creeps neigh
..
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