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Nov 22, 2010
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green eyes! still unseen......
what fool must he be
to ignore lovely eyes
as yours
you have four boys
and
a girl
keep your family intact
each one is a pearl
including him
for whom your poem
now you unfurl
hope he does awake
from the slumber
in which he basks
and
its high time that
now he unmasks
— loved, Nov 22, 2010
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
loved
15 years 6 months ago
my perpetual
thanks for ur everlasting support
loved
15 years 6 months ago
thanks
removed the excess weight
t thanx