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Jan 07, 2012
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The Gothic Teenager!
The teenager in you
Is full of bubbles
And
Belief in tin soldiers,
With nonchalant glee
And
The way of expression starts with doubt,
Will a tin soldier ever love me?
Or make me believe
That all he is, a lover boy
And
For that to secure himself,
He may lie, to lie with me.
Oh young, as I was a kid,
I picked up an ink pen,
This is now replaced by men.
I am a musician and play a guitar,
A piano drums too…
I wanted to draw but couldn’t do.
I have hopes of joining the FBI,
But for now I think poetry will do
Oh summer girl are you listening too
A summer soldier has enjoyed with you.
— loved, Jan 07, 2012
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Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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loved
14 years 6 months ago
This poem has been inspired
by the teenagers poem,
I just read here.
My apologies girl .
Oh!
Teenager ,you!
emogothgirl
14 years 6 months ago
what the hell do i say to that?
the gothic teenager. jeezum. good one.
-mag
loved
14 years 6 months ago
I was about to shiver
what in hell....? you asked !
Then i smiled at last
Thank you teenager
A very HAPPY NEW YEAR
And many more to come .T
his is just the beginning ,
many more will come after 2012,
till eternity comes home to thee
Humans!
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