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Funny What.

I am funny
no
but shall compose

life is nothing else
but bottled up fun
like having
a Soda and rum

could begin
initially for some

but I love
Scotch
it only corks
when taken on the rocks

it gives a hard kick
no manly horse's
does it so quick

many guys
standing besides me
run they say

'mad man'
he

seeking only fun
sad he is now
a dark black horse
but be happy

a real oldie

About This Poem

Last Few Words: trying to be punny funny is it LOL- worthy

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 10 months ago

Nudely huh?...

Now, that would be funny! When we get old, we don't look like we should go around nude. Matter of fact, the more clothes the better! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

lovedly

5 years 10 months ago

well Gee

sans teeth
sans smell
sans taste
sans that
do you recall
Shakingspeare
still could be funnier

15 has already slaughtered me

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 10 months ago

lovely lovely

Kings beddy
15 x15 at the least
lol
shall glue the title
lol

S

Sparrow 42

5 years 10 months ago

Teddy

Careful you missed an e from "their" also an extra vowel added, lol
Single Malt NO ice, lol..
Take care have a lovely day,
Ian Again x

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 10 months ago

which title 15

and which
e

is missing and from where

r u foxing me
lol then

S

Sparrow 42

5 years 10 months ago

Loved

Behave you can see that June is spelt with an "E" you just want someone to talk to lol ...