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Dec 14, 2020
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frostbite
a hot shower after leaving your house
my love continues to sprout
water hitting my cold skin
from feeling the winter wind
frostbite to the touch
i miss your warm touch so much
feeling my sore body
from when you made love to me
a good pain
scenes replaying in my brain
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 10 months ago
Ahhhh...
the rigors of love making! You have left an indelible scene. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 10 months ago
I think GEE Meant
state of rigor mortise
when the body loses elasticity
hard rock now
so tc
frost bites partly
i experienced it
glad main part was saved
recovered soonly