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Apr 28, 2013
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Forsythia
Irony
insists on
these two things:
your tongue taming
the yellow.
I forget
what
the other is.
— Kailashana2, Apr 28, 2013
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Ian.T
13 years 2 months ago
Anna
Maybe it is the smothering beauty of the green, that arrives late,
is the rest of the write ??
As short as this is, it is a large puzzle to sort out, it has a multitude of sighs..
Yours Ian.T
Rula
13 years 2 months ago
dear Anna
I'd be grateful if you could remember the other one :) though I loved the
ending lines very much.
Does your yellow flower symbolize the coward?
weirdelf
13 years 2 months ago
I forget too
and when I remember, I might not tell you.
Love it.
Esker
12 years 10 months ago
"your tongue taming the yellow"
Like how your poetry bleeds off
like that..like someone thinking aloud
away....looking into that distance..
I remember conversations
with people like this..
I talk aloud like this all the time
and it just pisses people off.
I like smart people
creative people..
realize how rare
it is
to find them...
MIssed this poem
but not really..
I found this..!
scribbler
12 years 10 months ago
Now Anna--
You Know there are two things in poetry which are of utmost importance : a good memory and......and.......uh....what were we talking about?.............stan
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