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Feb 11, 2014
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Forgo the King..
winters shadow
like the fluid sundogs gleaming
edge a soft beauty
their careful swift wings
will walk with me
bend harsh this deliverance
in these times
for he wears no crown
that all can see
humble
with his love
— Esker, Feb 11, 2014
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emeka ozurumba
12 years 3 months ago
supersonic
the leaves are bowing in the poem, but the imagery of the crown seals it