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Jul 05, 2021
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flaw
The condition to unconditionally love another
permits the inherent flaw of
unconditional tolerance. Oh no, in
silence of the future, in firm conviction of
one’s heart. Before & after will
not be the same. Life as it is, covers of
various realities. As it is, reality tells you
truth.
— knowledgevariable_, Jul 05, 2021
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Last Few Words: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgZCmCJJoCVwq2M3GH8VzLQ
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Ray Whitaker
4 years 10 months ago
So much in here
I like the assessment within
Perhaps use more metaphor, and allusion in it
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