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Aug 12, 2026
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Flat Dreams
Flat dreams,
Night after night fills
days upon days upon days upon days…
Retreating advance,
Advanced retreat,
However am I supposed to wake
from this sterile dream?
— quietremnants, Aug 12, 2026
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Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Tink
3 days 19 hours ago
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That is the Million Dollar question!!! I have been in that rinse & repeat cycle once or twice! Great job!
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