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Edward nigma
Edward nigma
Apr 11, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A flamboyant flower

A flamboyant flower
taunts and
towers .
Over every
clever
clean green
clover .
That is left
to shrivel
itself away
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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|Edward nigma

|Edward nigma

4 years ago

Thank you

And I thoroughly enjoy your company.

Alliteration I use or alliterate one letter so it doesn’t get convoluted and it will have a nice flow.

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

4 years ago

hello Edward,

within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.

sounds like a get-together-dinner with my family!

*hugs, Cat

p.s.
I hope you are well

|Edward nigma

|Edward nigma

4 years ago

Thank you

Well when you get used to writing the more you write. The more you will improve.